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Sept. 22, 2005
Many colleges these days outsource their bookstores or cafeterias or dormitories, based on the idea that private businesses may be able to provide better service at lower prices. Not everyone agrees with that idea, to be sure, but outsourcing of non-academic functions has become common.
But what about academic functions?
In a move that may take outsourcing past traditional levels, Kentucky’s community colleges this fall have started a pilot project in which an outside company is reading and providing evaluations of student essays in freshman composition courses. The program is small to date — only 48 students are having their papers assessed in this way — but Kentucky officials are enthusiastic about the potential for expanding the effort. And the company — Smarthinking — sees this as a service it would like to offer other colleges.
“The idea is that we can take the grading burden off of professors, and free up their time to do other things, such as working with students who need extra help,” said Burck Smith, CEO of the company, which has previously focused on providing outsourced tutoring centers for colleges in which students receive assistance online.
Not everyone is enthusiastic about the prospect of outsourced grading. “I’m appalled,” said Douglas Hesse, board chair of the Conference on College Composition and Communication. “This is abdicating something that is crucial to instruction,” said Hesse, a professor of English and director of the honors program at Illinois State University.
The pilot program is being developed by the distance education arm of the Kentucky Community and Technical College System, which currently enrolls about 40,000 students. Sandra L. Cook, who runs the distance education program, said, “We’re in a situation now where the demand [for courses] is higher than the supply, so we’re trying to create situations with faculty where we can develop efficiencies.”
The system has been working to be sure that the most popular general education courses are available online and are strengthened, and the grading plan is part of that effort, she said.
Faculty members have long complained about the “laborious grading process,” yet at the same time the system needs to find ways to educate more students without getting much more money, Cook said. Currently, class size tends not to exceed 25-30, she said, but the system would like to double or possibly quadruple that figure. “Our faculty have said that to scale up, they need more support,” she added.
“We want faculty to concentrate on the management of the course,” she said. “We want to see how we can take our master faculty members and spread them around among more students.”
Enter Smarthinking. The company has a good reputation on many campuses where its online tutoring services, which employ many adjunct or retired faculty members, have been able to offer students extended hours (24/7 in some cases) that most colleges could never afford if they were staffing a tutoring center. Those same tutors are now being trained to grade essays for the Kentucky system or other clients that may come along.
The grading is on a 32-point scale. Students receive up to 4 points (along with written comments as needed) in each of eight categories (worked out with Kentucky faculty members): main idea, introduction, content development, organization, transitions, conclusion, word choice and grammar. Each of those categories have subcategories that also receive 1-4 points, with the average of the subcategory scores being used to determine a category score. In content development, for instance, subcategories focus on such elements as topic sentences, the unity of paragraphs, and the use of analysis.
Smith stressed that faculty members could use the scores in any way they want. Aligning a score to a letter grade is a professor’s choice as is totally rejecting the score. Smarthinking has pledged to provide scores within 24 hours of receiving essays.
“Everything about this makes sense to the student and the institution. The student gets quicker turnaround and more consistent grading. The institution can get faculty members to focus more intensively on students,” Smith said.
He acknowledged that some people might object to outsourcing an academic function, but he said that this service will be in “the best interests of the students.” Cook also said that she would expect some faculty members to worry about this approach, and that’s why Kentucky is starting with a pilot project.
Hesse, of the college composition group, strongly disagreed. He acknowledged that this approach might lead to more consistency in grading, and that plenty of colleges use teaching assistants to grade papers, rather than a professor. But Hesse said that grading was not a function that should in any way be removed from the faculty members. The process of reading a paper and evaluating it, Hesse said, is crucial not only for assigning a grade, but for thinking about how to work with a given student, for evaluating whether certain assignments are achieving their goals, for revising lecture plans, and more.
“Grading is a central role,” he said.
While faculty members will be able to review and change evaluations, Hesse said that either they will do enough work of their own to do that well (in which case time isn’t saved) or they won’t (in which case students lose out).
“Let’s say somebody has spared me the time of grading — and I hate using ’spared’ in that way — there will be some teachers who will be very diligent, and will take this as one point of view and they will reproduce the same work. But I would fear the teachers who would be very cursory, and who might agree and say, ‘that’s an OK score,’ but they don’t know as much as they should about that student’s writing.”
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I worked as a TA a few years ago and yes, the grading is laborious, but it also connects you to the student and their writing — good or bad. If someone other than the classroom Professor is grading, there is a fundamental disconnect. Also, what if the Professor is failing to teach in a manner that is consistent with the grading. At least you have the option to modify grading based upon how much area is covered in the text, or how well the students comprehend the information after the lecture and so forth. With this “outsourcing machine” there is no room for flexibility. The advantage is most certainly toward the teachers. I thought academe was all about helping students evolve educationally. So sad. The nurturing component is lost to the Ghost in the Machine.
Natasha David, Natasha at University of Memphis, at 6:00 am EDT on April 17, 2008
I just don’t see it. While this sounds better than computer-graded essays, it still concerns me that the instructors aren’t going to know their students’ work. One of the opportunities I have—and relish—is the ability to watch my students develop as thinkers and writers. I need to be able to indicate my appreciation of a student’s progress in one area when that progress is noteworthy. I need to be able to sit down with a student and discuss how, exactly, an essay might have been improved, ideally in light of that student’s other work.
While I applaud the effort to provide greater access to students, I am leery of this appproach. Having said all that, however, I will recognize that the experiment is underway and I will reserve final judgement for a year from now.
Andrew Purvis, at 6:28 am EDT on September 22, 2005
I would feel more confident about the grading service being sold to Kentucky if the company’s CEO had employed the standard English phrase “taking the burden off professors” rather than the more colloquial “off of.” I realize that speech is less formal than is writing, but as chief spokesman for a product evaluating written English among college students, his choosing to adopt a non-standard phrase hardly helps sell his product. Shall we hope that the reporter mis-heard him?
Diane Vanner Steinberg, Asst. Prof. at The College of New Jersey, at 7:24 am EDT on September 22, 2005
This is a step in the right direction, toward greater emphasis on student outcomes. When assessment and instruction are separated, the options available for students to acquire education open wider. For example, when one is CLEPping out of undergraduate courses, it does not matter how one prepares; only the test score matters. In a classroom situation, the pool of potential instructors is restricted to only those who have earned MAs and PhDs. The PhD serves as a union card that severely limits the number of instructors. Taken to its logical conclusion, one could prepare for a composition assessment through traditional classroom work, through self-study, or at the knee of a crossword-loving aunt, and use SmartThinking’s score as the basis for awarding credit. All this prattle about relationships with students is fine, when one is babysitting 20-somethings away from home for the first time, but it does not serve adult learners, who are motivated by career advancement.
A. Chair, Business Department Chair, at 10:28 am EDT on September 22, 2005
If assessment drives instruction, perhaps the students would do better in an online course with fully outsourced professors. The quality of education is too important to have it outsourced.
Jane, at 10:32 am EDT on September 22, 2005
When assessement and instruction are separated, the student can decide how to acquire education. One need not prescriptively relegate him or her to an online ghetto. For some, the classroom is the optimal venue to learn. Others do well with self-study. In Lancaster System-like arrangements, students teach each other. The status quo serves the elitist ends of the highly-educated, by constricting the supply of qualified instructors, thereby keeping prices high. When assessment and instruction are separated, assessment becomes more objective and instruction becomes more competitive.
A. Chair, Business Department Chair, at 10:49 am EDT on September 22, 2005
Responding to student writing is part of the learning process, both for the teacher and the student. Teachers learn the path of reasoning used by the student, the ways in which sentence structure support or don’t support meaning, and the specific patterns of surface erros, all of which can influence what the teacher and students do together as the class progresses. Students hear the voice of the teacher who may think through options for expressing main points, arranging evidence, and choosing words and sentences.
A major problem in the whole area of assessment is equating feedback with evaluation. Feedback is for improvement, and evaluation is for ranking. If grading is necesssary, it should come from the teacher who knows the full context for what is being graded and how the grade will or will not contribute to learning. Giving and receiving feedback is an essential part of the learning process, not one that should be extracted from the teacher’s part of that process.
Barbara Cambridge, at 11:29 am EDT on September 22, 2005
I’m glad you are concerned about assessment, learning styles, and how it drives student and institutional success.
However, your primary argument seems to be that a college or university degree is merely a certification process that one must go through to achive a higher salary and thus higher living standard. Is this all education should be concernt with? What about educating student to be active participants in social and civic dialogue? A liberal education does not mean churning out Liberals; it means fostering the beginnings of a lif- long love of ideas and learning.
Contrary to popular belief, the goal of a college-level composition course is not to drill students in “correct” English grammar and mechanics, which are grounded in Victorian-era class politics.
No, the goal now is to teach students to recognize rhetorical situations and utilize rhetorical methods to successfully address that situation. This cannot be boiled down to a score, and often times cannot be boiled down to a grade.
How often do you “grade” a book you have read? How often do you “grade” a newspaper article or a business report? No, you do not grade these forms of writing, you react to them, you dismiss them, you evaluate the worth of the ideas presented therein. You decide whether a piece is well written based on how it affects you—intellectually, emotionally, physically, and sometimes spirtually. You can’t hang a score on one those things, no matter how you try. Yes, “correct” grammar is one element, but it is not the only element nor the primary element on on which the decision is made. Books by great writers often contain grammar and mechanical errors, but we do not ignore them because one or two commas are out of place or a transitive verb should have been used instead of an instrasitive one.
On a final note, I shudder to think about the students you consider you are “babysitting.” This says volumes about your approach to teaching. I do not mean this as an ad hominem attack, merely an observation. Are you more concerned with controlling how many As you give out, or are you concerned with what your students can actually apply what has been learned in class in an actual business situation? In business classes you do case studies based on hypothetical situations; in writing classes, we do real writing.
On a side note, I’ve had classes of adult learners concerned with career advancement. Sometimes they are just as likely to need what you might consider babysitting as a classroom full of freshly minted high school graduates.
mws, Assistant Professor of English at Johnson County Community College, at 11:34 am EDT on September 22, 2005
I teach adult and high-risk students at a regionally-accredited proprietary college. Many of our students have been closed out of state universities, due to the artificially high admissions standards necessitated by subsidized in-state tuition rates. There is nothing morally wrong with this; it is simple economics. When the price of a good or service is artificially below its equilibrium price, the quantity demanded will exceed the quantity supplied. State universities cannot accept everyone who a) is bright enough to complete a program that is acceptable to a regional accrediting agency and b) can afford the in-state tuition. Thus, non-price barriers are needed.
However, that leaves a lot of people shut out of higher education. My students are predominantly single mothers and mid-life returnees. Effectively all of them work fulltime and see education as a career-advancemnt tool.
I went to state schools for both undergraduate and graduate studies. My ‘babysitting’ jibe was in reference to my own experience. My undergraduate curriculum was very liberal in both American senses of that term. (My graduate work, on the other hand, was very highly focused.) I had a blast as an undergrad, and sailed through my Creative Writing, Art Appreciation, Meteorology (cloud identification), Sociology, and other general education courses with flying colors. I was in my 20s and really enjoyed my taxpayer-paid four-year vacation. (This was in the 1980s, just before federal grants dried up.)
Twenty years later, things are a bit different.
My students chafe at general education requirements. They don’t see them as enriching or great ways to keep their GPAs up. They want core courses, and only core courses that will enable them to move ahead in their careers.
I reject the one-size-fits-all mentality represented in several of the posts here. Let Dartmouth College run its kite making courses (yes, they have offered such courses). If that’s what the children of the privileged consider to be a valuable use of their time and tuition, great. I’m all for it.
If only the representatives of the status quo would extend the same courtesy to those students who see education as a way of get out of their disadvantaged situations.
A. Chair, Business Department Chair, at 12:34 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
Bravo, mws. Great posting.I see that you are an asst. prof. I hope you’re in line for promotion soon!
normalvision, Prof. of English (Ret.), at 12:35 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
That should have been:
If only the representatives of the status quo would extend the same courtesy to those students who see education as a way of GETTING out of their disadvantaged situations.
A. Chair, Business Department Chair, at 1:10 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
For a business professor A Chair seems to misunderstand supply and demand issues among liberal arts instructors. While business programs may need to offer reasonably competative salaries to woo faculty away from the private sector, the humanities are faced with an overproduction and oversupply of MAs and PhDs, people whose degrees direct them solely towards the academy. With the exception of elite institutions, which recuit senior faculty from a relatively limited pool of “name” professors, most institutions pay wages that, in many cases, are less than what their students will get in their first post-collegiate job. The cost of a modern education, I would guess, has very little to do with faculty remuneration (even with benefits) and a lot more to do with other costs particularly in administration.
Poor PhD, at 2:34 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
I teach at a community college. I have a similiar student population that A. Chair refers to in his/her post.
I don’t know if community colleges have a far better ROI for students in terms life-time salary earnsing per dollars spent toward a degree than a for-profit college, private university, or state-funded universities. And the issue of funding of state universities is another matter entirely.
But I do know that community colleges are less expensive in terms of price per credit hour than other higher ed institutions. Community colleges are continually asked to do more with less. And we have been meeting that challenge, especially with the Bush Administration promoting community and technical colleges as paths to career enrichment and gateways into other institutions of higher ed.
However, I am aghast at the Kentucky system’s decision to outsource grading, as the population served by such institutions need the most teacher-student interaction, whether online or face-to-face, than any other. Not because they are less intelligent and need more hand-holding, but because they have been shut ouf of other entry ways into the system and need encouragement to succeed.
So let us be clear: this decision to outsource grading is not about the students. It is about increasing enrollment, which brings in more money. But it will not necessarily translate into an enhanced learning experience, because students will be graded on a rubric system they nor the instructors control.
Is this a matter of control? Yes. It is. Grading and evaluation of student preparedness, skill mastery, and content competency is a core function of the faculty member. Faculty are professionals who set the standards of content and evaluation in their courses. To take away a key part of that control is to begin to undercut the role of the faculty. Notice that this is being done only in distance learning courses. My guess is that the DL classes are not taught by full-time faculty members, but by adjuncts who might not even be located in the same region as the college whose courses they are teaching, and who do not have an investment in the department. Ultimately, we may find ourselves merely content providers, not instructors. Yes, this is a slippery slope argument, but it is worth thinking about, because it means we will be faced with difficult decisions. What does it mean to be a full-time, tenured faculty member when all you need to do is provide course content? Why can’t you be easily replaced by contract employees? It cuts to the very heart of what we do.
This is not to disrespect the hard, courageous work of legions of adjunct instructors. I put in my time teaching assembling a schedule of courses at various colleges and tutoring companies when I first began teaching and found it to be hard, time consuming work slogging between campuses for one third the pay and none of the benefits of the full-time faculty. But I did it because I love the work, because I liked being around students and seeing them gain confidence in their ability to articulate themselves in ways they did not know they could. If I was merely mechanically scoring their papers without any thought to the person who put the words on the page, then I would be doing the students and myself an incalcuable disservice.
Business decisions which are based purely on economic factors and not human factors are bad decisions, Period. People are not numbers or dollar figures to be shifted from one column to the next.
mws, Asst. Prof. of English at Johnson County Community College, at 2:34 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
Why not outsource ALL written exams to India, Pakistan, Indonesia, or even private companies in the United States?
fred lapides, at 4:54 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
This outsourcing of essays is only a way to further disempower the instructors, 75% of whom are classified as non-tenure in our state of Washington. This is just a way to keep teachers in poverty. If the colleges and universitites really want to save money, then how about outsourcing administrators, who are making about 5 to 10 times more than 75% of the faculty.
Terry Knudsen, Instructor of English at Spokane Community College, at 5:32 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
Say what we will about the hard truths in skyrocketing enrollments and the supply-demand issues deeply felt by two- and four-year colleges across the nation, we surely do not miss the real relevance behind this whole outsourced grading issue: Namely, that English teachers are among the hardest hit when it comes to being overloaded with grading obligations. In fact, it’s because we ARE so hard-pressed to keep on grading like the Energizer Bunny—even when we don’t have the energy to open a can of soup sometimes—that perhaps we ought to reassess the real academic issue here: the spirit of the letter grade and the overall quality of the Smarthinking assessment device itself.
Does it have ZERO merit to its credit? Can we find nothing positive about Smarthinking? Would it be smart of us English teachers to refuse Smarthinking a fair trial? Luckily, the KY folks think it is wise to give it a shot. Someone has to be a leader of the pack. Why shouldn’t it be Kentucky?
While some people might be so afraid of their job’s security that they’d never dream of asking for help with the mounds and mounds of paper-checking tedium, and while some might not dare provide students with alternatives to a parasitic grading system in order to provide students with that much-needed feedback., I’m more intrigued by how many might be afraid of losing professional face somehow if they were to try something like Smarthinking’s offerings… just to see if it made a positive difference.
It’s almost as if some fear they’d be perceived as having no professional integrity should they not remain totally in charge of their students’ writing from beginning to end. Yet, many of these same totalitarians do not hesitate to send their students off down the hallway to their local Writing Centers for basically the same feedback—albeit without the requisite credentialing among its tutors that Smarthinking can at least boast.
Could it be possible that some might believe writing teachers cannot truly be teaching writing if they themselves are not working through all those nit-picky issues of mechanics, grammar, critical thinking, paragraph development, all by their tired, worn-out selves? Well, excuse me for begging the time of my readers long enough to ask “Who’s to say that a burned-out writing teacher’s feedback will be any more effective than Smarthinking’s tutors could provide?
Will the Kentucky crowd see better results by giving their instructors a much-needed reprieve? What if, in the end of this pilot, the end product of the 48-students involved actually produces better writing and fewer burned out heroes and heroines across The Commonwealth? What will CCCC’s Hesse *then* be whining about?
Let’s face it: If one is teaching very many writing courses at all, there’s very little get up and go after grading mountains of glib drivel across several months’ time. So, when one is completely worn out, is THIS a true sign of being “in charge” of students’ writing? Maybe Hesse’s real concern is that teachers of English are SO worn down and worn out all the time that SOME might be tempted to take the Smarthinking score as “the final answer.” But in all honesty, I highly doubt that will occur. People who teach composition do so because they are passionate about writing, not because they’ll make more money by agonizing over every little thing that could go wrong or be wrong in any student’s paper. Ironically, we often preach the gospel of collaboration in writing workshops because two heads are better than one, yet we now also want to take control of the collaboration process by assuming Smarthinking is not smart enough to choose its tutors well enough to compete with other heads—like student tutors and burned out English instructors? Indeed.
I’m sure many will disagree with me here, but I have to say, quite frankly, that of all the possible sources for writing assistance available out there via online avenues, Smarthinking is an excellent way to bolster what we do in the classroom. I took the time to “assess” and “grade” the writing instructors who “tutor” at Smarthinking. I’m sure these folks’ Master’s Degrees had SOMETHING to do with their being hired, not to mention their quite credible experience in writing instruction.
So, whether we comp instructors send our students to our local writing centers (where students get help from often ill-refined “resources” like undergraduate student tutors who haven’t yet earned their bachelor’s degrees), or whether we farm them out to those undeniable friends of theirs in the dorm rooms (aka “unauthorized collaborative resources"), or whether we send them to the library or to an online writing lab (like Purdue’s famous one), the bottom line is that feedback on a piece of writing does not create a final say in the whole matter. To equate Smarthinking’s 32-point “grading” system as remotely indentical with the sort of bottom-line/semester-long assessment and final grade evaluation is simply not well-conceived. It’s simply NOT smart thinking at all.
Even though the KVC is using Smarthinking as ONE resource, there’s nothing in this article that even implies the whole grade of the course hinges on the 32-point “grading” system that has been pre-approved and pre-determined by the qualified (no doubt) faculty members involved in the pilot. That any instructor can “take it or leave it” when making the final assessment implies, to me at least, that the Kentucky folks might be doing both the students AND the instructors a big favor by employing Smarthinking. By allowing instructors to have access to all the Smarthinking “chat-scripts,” it isn’t –after all has been said and written—as if there’s no way to monitor or revise Smarthinking’s student-tutor activities.
As well, because the students can gain insights from a pre-approved resource when the instructors can’t be there themselves, it’s at least a step in the right direction of keeping the students writing in process with a reputable set of tutors available. Even at its worst, I can only imagine Smarthinking doing much more good than ill for its clients (in this case, both students AND faculty). It’s the closest thing to having a teaching assistant than anything else I’ve seen out there. Is it just that my school doesn’t practice this, or do all my fellow-colleagues at other community colleges have teaching assistants at their beck and call?
We don’t censor Purdue’s OWL like this. Is it that Smarthinking is one of those cutting-edge technologically-saavy companies that finally has found a win-win that we can’t tolerate because we want to maintain absolute control? How is it that a Master’s Degree from a Smarthinking tutor is going to be less productive in providing student feedback than a student tutor who’s not even graduated with ANY special credentialling to his or her credit? The last time I checked, none of our WRC’s local student tutors have degrees that rival the likes of Smarthinking’s crew. Besides, even if they did, as the instructor of record, I’d still have the final say about the ultimate grade that is assigned. How would my using Smarthinking for this purpose be any different?
Could it be that Hesse is most concerned about instructors not doing their jobs at all? If so, then he needs to hire a set of work-ethic police, maybe a whole squad of them. In the meantime, Hesse himself might do well to “stop, look, and listen” long enough to see that such senseless needling of the Smarthinking messengers makes him a grand target for winning the tyrant of the year award. Smarthinking presents us (English teachers especially) some long overdue good news, if you ask me. For students with writing issues like many of mine have, and for Smarthinking to be able to provide that help on a 24/7 basis, I’d be doing my students a disservice by not suggesting they check it out—if not by virtue of my school’s adoption, then totally on their own.
In those few cases when I have done just that, the outcomes were positive—both for the students and me. The students got timely, appropriately monitored assistance that I felt I could trust, and I still got to assign the final grade over a curriculum I designed and did not lose control over. Did I shirk my responsibilities by doing this? I highly doubt it, seeing as how I did this during a semester when I taught six (count em!) introductory composition courses at a community college wherein there was very little to offer in our fledgling writing resource center at the time.
LKD, at 6:39 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
We have three threads going here:
— separation of instruction and assessment — supply and demand dynamics — educational opportunities for high-risk students
After reading mws’s response to my response, I accept much of the subsequent analysis and am comfortable turning this around: outsource instruction and keep the grading in-house. This is what we do, when we employ TAs, more or less. (Actually, one of my colleagues pointed this out to me, after reading your comments. I think that it is a brilliant concession.)
Have the adjuncts and TAs teach, and let the professors do the quality control, and not only for students at their own universities.
As long as instruction and assessment are separated, the system is immune from corruption of the kind that shrill, right-wing libertarians like to write books and op ed pieces about.
With regard to Poor PhD’s post, I stipulate that supply and demand dynamics of differ from department to department. Where I work, Psychology and Literature instructors are a dime a dozen, Marketing adjuncts who meet the minimum educational requirements of our accrediting agency are hard to find, and a mentally stable Finance instructor is as rare as hens’ teeth.
A good Psychology instructor will get paid the going paltry rate; a good Marketing instructor will be able to negotiate the PhD rate with only an MA and probably be offered a fulltime position; and I would pay a premium for a Finance instructor who agreed to take his meds regularly.
At the end of the day, I stand by my original assertion that the one-size-fits-all oligopoly a) does a grave disservice to high-risk students (otherwise they wouldn’t be flocking to University of Phoenix, DeVry, et.al.), and b) is facing serious competition. This Kentucky thing is a step in the right direction of embracing the inevitable.
You don’t have to like it — and I gather that you don’t — but the separation of instruction and assessment is a very effective quality control tool. Just as online and distance education were once the purview of low-end schools, but has been embraced by the likes of Harvard, I’ll wager one US dollar that this Kentucky thing is just the beginning.
I think it’s great. You don’t.
I’m not trying to recruit you to my way of thinking, and I certainly didn’t expect a Spanish Inquisition. ;-)
A. Chair, Business Department Chair, at 9:17 pm EDT on September 22, 2005
What motivates outsourced grading is the same thing that motivates the exploitation of TAs and adjuncts: the pecuniary habits of higher ed institutions, who are no different than Wal-Mart in their protection of profit margins.
However, leaving that considerable consideration aside, we must understand that outsourced grading will exacerbate one of the biggest problems plaguing the American academy today: plagiarism. I police plagiarism by requiring daily writing assignments—by the time we get to the research paper, I “know” my students’ writing. More importantly, THEY know I know it. I suspect that whatever army of outsourced graders who reads my student’s essay will have little or no exposure to what that student wrote the last time.
An irony, I suspect, of outsourced grading is that it will appeal to the Big Time U prof with a 2-2 course load, but not to the single-mom adjunct teaching an overload (with 28 students in her limited-to-25 comp sections) who actually cares about what her students learn in class.
To institutions who really care about “freeing up” time for their faculty: hire more professors.
L. Van Meter, at 6:19 am EDT on September 24, 2005
It would be so much more efficient to have composition classes of 100-300 students, a few TAs to keep the peace, and a Grand Lecturer on Composition. The students will demonstrate their writing ability by taking multiple-choice tests. This way we can get around the outsourced grading of essays, eliminate adjuncts altogether, and give everyone the truly cheap education envisioned by Smartthinking and their customers.
Kathy, Instructor, at 9:32 am EDT on September 28, 2005
What’s REALLY scary is Chair’s assertion that “there’s nothing morally wrong with this,” that it’s “simple economics.” There’s no such thing as simple economics and every economic policy rests on the foundation of some sort of moral judgment, as we have seen quite plainly now for the past 5 years of “compassionate conservative” economic policy from the Bush administration.
J. Novak, at 10:22 am EDT on September 28, 2005
Only, it was high school and f2f. In my senior year, the Ford Foundation paid for my English teacher to have an “outside reader” for everything we wrote that year. The outside reader did not give us a grade, but did comment (not as thoroughly as I do when teaching writing).
Now that I’m 30+ years older, I understand that my teacher spent considerable time trying to decide whether she agreed with the reader and how to interpret the reader’s comments for me. I have a clear picture of her with hand on forehead, staring down at a green inked comment silently for what seemed a very long time. And she knew the “outside reader,” who was a friend of hers!
Bottom line: Anecdotally, I’m thinking you might save some time by outsourcing, but not enough. The instructor has to catch up on the graders’ work, decide whether she agrees with the grade, and then interpret the results for the student. Probably, you’re saving *at best* 50% of an instructor’s grading time (I’m agreeing with Hesse).
BUT, that is because the logic of the KY program is flawed, as I’ll be glad to explain in a second post.
Disclaimer: my organization uses a whiteboard licensed from Smarthinking.
Ben Reynolds, Sr Prog Coord Distance Ed at CTY/Johns Hopkins Univ, at 12:04 pm EDT on September 28, 2005
My organization runs a college-level composition program for gifted jr. and sr. high students. Our entry course for students with qualifying SAT-V scores is Crafting the Essay. http://cty.jhu.edu/writing/courses/level3cdrm.html
After teaching the course for 20+ years both f2f and distance, what we’ve found is that the distance version doesn’t need teachers to make syllabi, choose readings, etc. We use a CD designed by experts in teaching writing. The CD replaces the human’s every semester repetition of writing strategies and tactics (how to transition between paragraphs or how to structure an essay). You can view the CD over the web at http://www.cty.jhu.edu/cdw3
Once you’ve got an expert lecturing machine, you can use your humans for what they do best — answering questions the pre-programmed lectures (whether on a CD or f2f in a classroom) can’t. Thus, our faculty (just as qualified as Smarthinking’s) spend their time running workshops and critiquing essays. See a sample essay and critique at http://cty.jhu.edu/writing/samples/essayetc.html
The heavy lifting in composition courses is responding to student writing. Smarthinking is doing that work. Kentucky ought to “release” its instructors and let Smarthinking do the teaching.
Disclaimer: My organization uses a whiteboard licensed from Smarthinking.
Ben Reynolds, Sr. Prog. Coord at CTY/Johns Hopkins University, at 12:47 pm EDT on September 28, 2005
Note to MWS:
We seem to have forgotten the helpful rule that the plurals of numbers, letters and symbols actually require an apostrophe. This prevents A’s from becoming As. I know this seems extremely petty, but it reflects our growing neglect/abandonment of helpful principles of usage. Such “rules” exist to facilitate communication, yet we tend to fail to pass them on, to forget them or to ignore them. All this bodes ill for the fundamental process of writing: one mind engaging another to produce authentic, clear, audience- and purpose-driven communication.
A. Teacher, at 1:41 pm EDT on September 28, 2005
What is truly prattle is the idea that we as writing instructors aren’t already emphasizing student outcomes. My God, we see it every time we read a writing assignment! Assessment and instruction are already inseparable, in terms of pedagogy, so what is the value of this outsourced grading? Perhaps to emasculate the already emasculated instructor in the era of commodified education?
James, English Composition Instructor, at 1:42 pm EDT on September 28, 2005
I cannot agree with one warrant for your argument. You claim that students can choose their education once this separation of instruction and evaluation is complete. What you neglect in this is the assumption that students must then be qualified to make such decisions. I would like to see a defense of that element of your argument.
I would also like to know just how many English classes you have taught (taking courses or observing them does not count) that you have any significant inside perspective on the pedagogical techniques employed by composition instructors.
You will note that I have already supported, if only out of my own curiosity at this point, the continuation of this experiment until such time as significant data can instruct the district whether or not to continue. I support that, but I cannot abide commentary by the inexperienced (in English) who comment on education as if universities were the only public system around. California alone has 103 community colleges. Factor those institutions into your equations, please.
Andrew Purvis, at 2:21 pm EDT on September 28, 2005
I teach seven, three-credit writing courses every semester, both on-line and on-campus, at a community college in Wisconsin. With 150-160 students every semester, I am overwhelmed by all the grading and paperwork and couldn’t survive without Smarthinking: I love Smarthinking’s feedback for students.
As LKD described, I was a burned out teacher. However, last school year and this year, with Smarthinking’s help, I have time not only to open a can of soup but actually to work one-on-one with students who need direct feedback from me, their instructor.
While some students benefit from the Writing Center down the hall, and that’s where I refer them, oher students must work with me, which is my true joy oin teaching. Grading papers holds no joy for me.
The e-structors at Smarthinking provide students more feedback—up to two pages per essay!—than I ever could. Only for the students’ mid-term essays and final research papers do I mark the work myself—after they’ve first received feedback from Smarthinking. For all other assignments, their feedback comes strictly from Smartthinking, and it’s wonderful. I assign the final grades, of course.
To have Smarthinking provide students feedback as well as a letter grade or score? Well, where do I sign up? Now that I’ve seen what Smarthinking does and how qualified their e-structors are, and believe me—it’s all impressive—I would sign up today.
Go Kentucky! This Wisconsin teacher is watching you. JM
J. Martin, Professor, at 1:45 pm EDT on September 29, 2005
As I see it, the problem with outsourceing grading in composition courses is that my grades largely depend on what we have (or have not) been discussing in class. Thus my expectations for details, organization, thesis, grammar, etc. differ from assignment to assignment. The outsourcing process that is described here appears to evaluate all papers using the same basic rubric. Is that fair to the students?
Ed Vavra, at 1:50 pm EDT on September 29, 2005
Outsourced grading is just one more extreme manifestation of the common “current-traditional” approach to teaching writing. If good writing consists of following the conventional generic structure (thesis statement at end of one-paragraph introduction; “body” paragraphs comprising a transition, a topic sentence, and “details"; summary conclusion), and what the writer actually thinks is merely a subcategory of “content development” along with “paragraph unity” and “topic sentence,” then why not send the papers off to be graded? The student, the teacher and the course context can be safely ignored.
Doug Sherman, at 3:54 pm EDT on September 29, 2005
I don’t necessarily have a problem with the Kentucky program, but I don’t see how it will free up all that much time for the faculty member — for the simple reason that you can’t help someone with their writing unless you actually read their writing.
The scoring of a paper is really not very time consuming, as far as the number you put on it. Any experienced writing teacher can usually tell how good or bad a paper will be just by scanning the first paragraph. Heck, often enough, just by looking at the first sentence.
What eats up the time is thinking about how to give the individual student feedback that they will take to heart, whether that feedback comes in a face-to-face meeting or in written comments and annotations. There’s a difference between reading a paper and seeing that it’s pretty disorganized and then figuring out the best way to get the writer to “see” the disorganization and then to work out a way to make the paper better.
Smartthinking can provide a useful service in giving the student another source of feedback (and tutoring) and in giving the instructor an objective, outside perspective on what their students are doing. But to tell the truth if I were using their services it would mean MORE time for me with each student, because I would want to go over each of their Smartthinking reports on their papers with them to show them how they could use this feedback to improve their performance.
Writing instruction is inherently inefficient and time consuming, because you simply cannot separate assessment and instruction. The assessment IS the instruction.
AJH, at 3:12 pm EDT on September 30, 2005
As a former grad student at Villanova University who used to grade high school social studies essays at.10/page, I’m wondering why universities don’t “outsource” the grading to upper-classmen in the College of Education or even grad students. Seems it would be cheaper and a valuable OJT experience for the graders. Otherwise, I think it’s probably advisable to have some other entity focus on the basics as described in your article (intro, conclusion, sentence structure, etc.,thus allowing the professors work on higher-level writing topics.
Michaela Meyers, Curriculum Specialist at Hillsborough County Public Schools, Tampa, at 9:34 am EDT on October 3, 2005
You might have forgotten the apostrophe rule, but I haven’t. You also seem to have forgotten that using the royal “we” to speak about an issue you have with the person you are directing a criticism toward is condescending, rude, and smacks of classism.
My most recent edition of Hodge’s Harbrace Handbook, on page 239, indicates that an apostrophe is NOT required to indicate plurals of letters, numbers. The MLA style guide says that they should be used: so, who you gonna trust? No where in this forum or on the comment posting page does it say that we are to adhere to the rules of MLA style; thus the usage decision I made.
When the conventions conflict, you go with your gut. Picking on someone’s grammar and mechanics is extremely petty—especially given the rhetorical situation: an online commentary system wherein emotion and “need for speed” typing often overrule clarity of grammar and playing “by the rules.” And here we have a situation where the “rules” conflict. What would the outsourced grader do in a situation like this? Mark it down because they think it is not acceptable use, when one of the most widely used grammar handbooks says it is? What does that mean for the student who gets the paper back with an error marked, but a handbook that says there’s no error at all?
It doesn’t matter if I say A’s or As, as you knew exactly what I meant from the context of the situation. Does this mean that grammatical conventions do not apply to anything we write? No, of course not. But it means we must read the entire rhetorical situation in order to understand the piece of writing. And I’m not sure that outsourced evaluators can do that, because they are not situated in the rhetorical situations which exist in the classroom and may not be skilled enough readers to accurately gauge the rhetorical situation the student is trying to address off the page or create on the page.
And that is what “we” should be teaching students to do instead of worrying over petty usage issues when “we” ourselves haven’t checked the grammar handbook before putting “our” foots in “our” mouths.
MWS, Asst, Prof., of English at Johnson County Community College, at 8:40 am EDT on October 6, 2005
Touche!
Tammy Allen, instructor at Delta Community College, at 12:23 pm EDT on October 6, 2005
In this ongoing debate over the value of outsourcing writing assessment, most of these readers seem to have missed a point only the “modest proposal” noticed: that institutions may be outsourcing their grading because they want to cram more students into each section of composition. Doubling class sizes that are already at 25-30? Even if every student received an individualized printout of his/her essay’s flaws, the students would all get lost in the mass of a large lecture hall. My freshmen comp students often tell me that our class of 20 is the only course where their instructor knows their names and makes sure that they are coming to class. Writing is so much more than following a flow chart or filling in blanks. A student writer can only develop when she is able to understand how her writing is a conversation with readers, both known and unknown.
I stopped writing extensive comments on essays because I found many students weren’t reading or responding to them. Instead, I encourage students to come to my office for 15-minute conferences, where I read their essays with them, comment orally, and require them to talk about ways to improve their writing and write their improvements directly onto the draft. This method is nothing original— Donald Murray wrote about conferencing 30 years ago. When a student makes a deliberate decision not to come for a conference, I will give him/her a grade based on reading the essay holistically (and quickly), keeping all my usual criteria in mind but not bothering to write anything on the paper. Quite often, these students then show up a few days later to talk about their writing and find out why I gave them that particular score.
The massively increased class sizes outsourced grading might cause would make my conferences ineffective. If I taught 200 students instead of 80 a semester, I would never be able to learn their names, let alone talk individually with most of them several times over the semester. They would know what score their essays received, but would most likely have no idea why or how to improve on their next essay or draft.
Betsy Gilliland, Lecturer at San Jose State University, at 6:16 pm EDT on October 12, 2005
Isn’t this still an improvement over having less qualified part-time TAs grading stuff? With these professional graders, the feedback could be alot better than the TAs will give anyway — and since so many schools rely on TAs this could only really be better.
Kevin, Undergraduate, at 1:54 pm EDT on October 13, 2005
Many of these comments see this outsourced grading as the opposite of teachers interacting with students. Simply because these papers are graded by another person does not mean that the teacher will no longer interface with the student. I’m a high school English teacher with 140 kids, meaning 140 papers to grade. If I taught English all day (I have one music class), I’d have about 170 kids/papers. With that load, I assign about one formal paper every 6 weeks. If I was able to have someone else grade the papers, I could continue with my 1 formal paper, but also assign many other smaller papers.
If I look at someone else’s evaluation of a paper, I can agree or disagree. Since I’m not reading the paper in order to make comments on it, it’s much quicker to read and I can focus on a holistic score rather than discreet scores in several categories of a rubric.
The assumption has been that all teachers who use this kind of grading will *only* use this kind of grading and will use it as a replacement for their own assessment. If professors are going to do that, they shouldn’t even be in the classroom in the first place.
This kind of assessment can be used *in addition* to the grading that is already done. It can also be used to expect more out of the students while still keeping the workload for teachers manageable.
Todd, High School English Teacher, at 4:39 am EST on January 19, 2006
How about the institutions pulling in the money from these extra hundreds of kids hire more qualified teachers? Then the graders for the outsourcing firms would have jobs... Not to mention class size may return to a reliable level. Or we could keep paying university presidents tons of bonuses as he/she pumps more robots into the system.
Rod, at 1:50 am EST on November 29, 2006
Hi Kevin,
Who do you suppose those “professional” graders are? Many of my TA friends in grad school scored essays to supplement their meager stipends.
KM, Assistant Professor of English, at 4:45 am EDT on May 15, 2007
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